Would anyone like to add something to this poem, it never seemed finished?


laugh laughed
, life mien ever has

think of me
1 moment @ time

impossible, me rest
if sense you're overwhelming loss
, felt alone

ask of
in deepest cloudless blue of sky allows self laugh

''what next ?... ''any old crap do'' , me please :)

laugh laughed , life mien ever has think of me 1 moment @ time impossible, me rest if sense you're overwhelming loss , felt alone ask of in deepest cloudless blue...


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