Opinions on this poem? c/c please?

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please tell me if think worded properly:

sick feeling
still want out
happy birthday tbo
these words want shout

you've been friend awhile
feel lucky have around
cause true friends not come easy
, many never found

on special day
hope in heart know
friend thinks world of
, sends many {{{hugs}}} wherever go
tbo, enjoy day in every way
, being you...a friend true blue.
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so, how sound, or there changes should make?
opinions appreciated help. thks,,,

please tell me if think worded properly: sick feeling still want out happy birthday tbo these words want shout you've been friend awhile feel lucky have around cause true friends not come easy , many never found on your...


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