Do you like your coffee black... & cold? how then, about my poetry?
`no white roses upon grave;
gone - happier days.
- let me egress dust,
idle possession turn crust.
epitaph; - read -
"imagine that".
died sober , heart-broken -
didn`t think come: -
loneliest spirits
demons best tempt.`
think write potent , concise enough , its`brevity adds its` solemnity.
i`ve tweaked punctuation , word or 2 keep pace , ambiance tight......
see think :)
indeed, compelling thought - provoking lament - poem ...it has `grist`.....i it.
8.2/ 10.
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no white roses on grave.
gone happier days.
let me egress dust,
idle possessions rust.
"imagine that"
written on epitaph.
died sober & heartbroken,
didn't think come...
loneliest spirits
demons tempt best.
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