New poem I wrote 'winter's promise' What do you think ?

it's nothing special, i'm looking forward winter, snow thought write theme.

winter’s promise

sunlit winter whispered name
, asked of me, ‘come near
, let cold breath
not of bitterness or bring fear’

eyes search landscape
place retreat,
finding nothing wish beside
hearth, take seat.

surrounded trees , snow
, no place warm,
accept request , lay still
ice form.

‘winter, why beauty
cost me ?
shall not love unconditionally
fear not chilled touch ?’

know words deadly
hear say,
‘lay down, snow blanket covers
solemn way.’

begin fear nothing, feel not cold
lay looking, upwards sky
, in sight heaven
breath had me die.

it's nothing special, i'm looking forward winter, snow thought write theme. winter’s promise sunlit winter whispered name , asked of me, ‘come near , let cold breath not of bitterness or bring fear’ eyes search the...

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