Can anyone please see if this makes sense?

can please check grammar on following quote, , correct me if doesn't make sense or sounds funny , make sound better. thanks!

call me hater
call me liar
call me paranoiac
call me jealous
call me rude
call me bitter
call me selfish
call me ugly
call me stupid
call me filthy
call me lazy
call me boring
call me envy
call me arrogant
call me ignorant
call me illiterate
call me sad
call me loner
call me impatience
call me failure
call me sinner
call me superstitious
call me unreal
call me hypocrite
call me disobedient
call me cheap
call me lowlife
call me whatever pleases you…
because criticizing me won’t change person am.
words cannot give or take;
love give &
facts speak
evidence found
reality behold
tranquillity indulge
etiquette act
kindness of mine pleases hearts of many
compassions in heart others
modesty have in soul
appearance of mine puts smile on face of many
activities keeps me busy
freshness of body fragrances atmosphere
humour in nature
ideas possess
sweetness spread, whichever environment pass bye
wisdom carry within me
knowledge enhance
happiness persist
surroundings revolves me
individuals gathers around me
struggles withstand patience
triumph hold within character
honesty shines thru feature
luck bring whoever’s doorstep enter across
purity in blood
sincerity in gene
excess of existence
personality immense
faith & obedience have lord , love me
, life live blessings! love! respect! honour! , dignity!!

can please check grammar on following quote, , correct me if doesn't make sense or sounds funny , make sound better. thanks! call me hater call me liar call me paranoiac call me jealous call me rude call me bitter call me selfish call me ugly call me stupid call me...

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