Is this a good poem for a Girl I like?


girl called claudia , wrote poem, good?
here is:

claudia,
in light blue sky
sun shines bright
eyes sparkle , burn
in deep dark of night

angel flying high
catch eye
because whatever may
make day

aphrodite
goddess of love, beauty , desire
dear
love, cherish , desire :)


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i girl called claudia , wrote poem, good? here is: claudia, in light blue sky sun shines bright eyes sparkle , burn in deep dark of night angel flying high catch eye because whatever may make my...


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