Is this motivational letter for admission in university is ok?


simranjeet singh
mobile-95019598768 e-mail-abc@gmail.com
date-28/11/2012
dr. vbn ghjkl
dept. software engineering , programming languages
institute software , systems engineering
university of california
d-7554 california, usa

dear sir,
name simranjeet singh , thoroughly excited writing university of california in order apply bachelor’s degree in computer science. forward prolific career software engineer working in great companies sap, microsoft , google purposely dedicated advancement of human race in field of science , technology.
living in age of great minds bill gates , late steve jobs. think fine of youngsters, computers have fascinated me childhood. still remember day when teenage boy , saw computer in school’s computer lab first time, possibilities crossed mind , eager see thing can possibly do. exploring more computer day day mind fabricated more ideas it. although physically present in other classes mind , thoughts computer , attractive way worked. fashioned outlook life , gave me new motive live. after completing high school inspired steve jobs , decided not degree , learn computer home , start own business. realize not easy.
have taken many short term training courses. have learnt lot computers. have developed knowledge of php,networking,flash action script 3.0 , asp.net 4.0.i have made programmes in c# , visual basic. of classified works include flash constructed website. however, when got out in wild these certificates found out not qualified job in multinational companies. these companies offer job people have graduated proper degrees well-respected colleges. have implemented idea leave behind , start over.
hobbies include football, going out cinema , odd club or pub, shopping myself , others, pc, , expensive of all, girlfriend. swim, find quite relaxing , exercise. love eat out, going out meals friends unrivalled social gathering including clubs , pubs, love sitting around table talking , joking friends while drinking , eating, try , @ least once month. friends important me , try best friend can."
ambition software engineer develop innovative products, unique, advance , revolutionary ideas . know have long way go achieve goal, until not equipped enough knowledge of technologies. bachelors programme in software , system engineering of university of augsburg offers want. modules of program me achieve want , t milestone career. background in computers, , experience of several projects , researches, able keep pace studies @ university of california. passion software engineering , desire improve academic , technical qualifications drive me forward in field.
thank valuable time in reading personal statement. looking forward hearing you.

simranjeet singh mobile-95019598768 e-mail-abc@gmail.com date-28/11/2012 dr. vbn ghjkl dept. software engineering , programming languages institute software , systems engineering university of california ...


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