I am The Fly Whisperer. Will you please read my initial status report?

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please feel offer comments of constructive critique on following poem. thanks, love , god bless, thomas
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fly whisperer

hello, let me introduce myself
name kindly plantice
love share talent
many laugh, no riant matter

years ago nicknamed “the fly whisperer”
started out harmless- kid; caught flies
no, didn’t squish em, torture em; loved them
became more pets, became life

able catch them bare hands
sedentary or flying, there no escaping me
kept house pets, or set free
many times go walks fly

permission, long hair daughter
tied gently around fly’s next , go stroll
1 time married couple flew off happy
couple flew off happier never found out

finally, got in local news, beyond
guy put fly swatter out of business
no more killing flies; need time out
marriages have been saved fly whisperer

fervent hope talk again
thank kindly

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______________________________________________________________________________ please feel offer comments of constructive critique on following poem. thanks, love , god bless, thomas ________________________________________________________________________________ fly...


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