Does this poem need a couplet at the end?Could you also suggest a title?

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whispers , askances glancing away eyes
little drops of poison, toxic kin mixed lies.
if chance slip , fall abysmal asitia,
before cut heart out, provide ample anesthesia.

3 barest of numbers, modesty @ odds
internal clock tick-tock-talking, taut wire; i'm flawed.
base desires fall flat , trapped, repressed; unwrap? dare
suggestive? did dead-end along meanwhile, somewhere?

face facade , flaunting, taunting me, taking no chance,
lip-sync timed eye-blinks, heartbeats fast romance.
skimming surface @ skin-deep, never daring drink
liquor of love, blending intimacy sweet, being aware how think.








there, that's i've got, innards smeared on floor , feeling little hollow. ever feel after writing something?<<<bq

their whispers , askances glancing away eyes little drops of poison, toxic kin mixed lies. if chance slip , fall abysmal asitia, before cut heart out, provide ample anesthesia. 3 barest of numbers, modesty @ odds internal clock...


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