Do you think that the poem i wrote is good?


wrote poem , want know people think of :
alone in room sit
feel walls closing in
start scream
start cry
no 1 comes ask me why

more sit
more think
theres 1 way
end
see knife
see rope
count ten , hope
ill wake on other side
cause no 1 care
if lived or died

i wrote poem , want know people think of : alone in room sit feel walls closing in start scream start cry no 1 comes ask me why more sit more think theres 1 way end see knife see rope count to...


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