Help me with this poem?

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okay need finishing poem wrote , have read in front of lots of people. need suggestions, feedback, critiquing, etc.

"i swallowed words spat out @ me , digested them, feeling anger rumble in stomach rage..."

me please >.<
, have tips reading in front of people?
in advance.

okay need finishing poem wrote , have read in front of lots of people. need suggestions, feedback, critiquing, etc. "i swallowed words spat out @ me , digested them, feeling anger rumble in stomach rage..." me please...


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