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drowning in ocean, burning in fire
both of these equal pain, of desire
spider spinning it's web, each twist , twirl
in eyes, bright pearl
more closely, @ each days simple things
feel slight pinch of pain, every second god brings
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drowning in ocean, burning in fire both of these equal pain, of desire spider spinning it's web, each twist , twirl in eyes, bright pearl more closely, @ each days simple things feel slight pinch of pain, every second god...


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