Carry on (a poem from someone who has been gone for too long) Comments and Critiques please?

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of friends may still on here know have been gone far long. im no sure yet if im or paying visit, comments on poem, whether know me or not.


carry on

you'd never guess smile
conceals broken heart
or happiness ruse
life that's falling apart
if gaze eyes
you'll see lies behind
you'll see layers peel away
tears threaten fall
lies wont last forever
tears fall someday
must carry on
, smile stays.

any of friends may still on here know have been gone far long. im no sure yet if im or paying visit, comments on poem, whether know me or not. carry on you'd never guess smile conceals broken heart or happiness is...


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