How can I make this poem better?


had write poem in english. turned in rough draft , got perfect score teacher said of lines seem little awkward , should re worded. me find lines awkward , me re word them in different way goes rythem of poem?
there long difficult path
there short boring path
path should take?

long path filled ups , downs
may have challenges
know goes
want long path ends
path should take?

short path flat
isn’t difficult
if choose short path don’t know i’ll end
path should take?

can handle ups , downs
end want be?
should take short boring path?
should take risk?
path should take?

think i’ll choose difficult path
hard in end
i’ll want
don’t want take easy way out
know path take.

i had write poem in english. turned in rough draft , got perfect score teacher said of lines seem little awkward , should re worded. me find lines awkward , me re word them in different way goes rythem of poem? there...


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