Will you care to read my poem?

hey guys! here's poem wrote out of boredom. tell me think, gladly appreciate feedback! in advance :)

nothing darkness
below vast of ocean
here was,
under abyss of despair,
left alone
left dead
yet felt no dread,
when put me here,
marched on , fled.

floating , floating
miles away,
found myself
@ bay
dragged feet across sand,
head hung low,
trudged land,
came find face again,
oh, boy,
should've seen did him then.

hey guys! here's poem wrote out of boredom. tell me think, gladly appreciate feedback! in advance :) nothing darkness below vast of ocean here was, under abyss of despair, left alone left dead yet felt no dread, when put me...

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