Is this poem any good? Where am I, in asking this question?


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have traveled mountains of despair,
thirteen days before christmas,
, did not find happiness nor perception
anywhere.
light has darkened in man made halls of stupidity,
, can nothing it.

blackbird flies day, blinded eyes?

sing atop peaks above clouds of earth.
hear?
think not.
voice echos off snowed ledges in harmony
life.
life earned, , have earned voice.
great grandsire fought valiantly grant me
voice.

blackbird flies day, blinded eyes?


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. have traveled mountains of despair, thirteen days before christmas, , did not find happiness nor perception anywhere. light has darkened in man made halls of stupidity, , can nothing it. blackbird flies day, blinded eyes? sing atop peaks above clouds of...


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